Picked Up Pieces from Two Books of Ice and Fire (MORE SPOILERS!!)

Continuing the discussion on the first two books of the George RR Martin saga – the previous ones are here and here – and incorporating some of the commentary I got from both the referred entries and re-working some other thoughts.

  1. Obviously I forgot about Bran as one of the leads in the second book.  What is interesting about him is that while what has happened to him – especially in the first book – was a sad fate, what lies ahead is pretty interesting.  Yes he is learning the ways of being a lord and whatnot – and like many of the Starks, he is really more comfortable being a fighter, or at least more comfortable in activity than in simply being a noble twit.  His crippling has him down – but he is still young and has the spirit that comes with it.  He still wants to be active certainly.  His escape following Theon’s attempt to take over Winterfell is one of the better scenes in the book certainly.  The future is uncertain, especially as they try to stay away from the myriads looking for them.
  2. Wait, how could I be finished with Bran?  What’s with the dreams?  Indeed – dreams seem to be a common thread in the Starks’ world, whether it be Eddard’s inner conflicts and complexities in the first book – and what Bran has now.  The wolf dreams hint at much more than meets the eye.  Sure Bran can’t move – or can he?  We know that he can get inside the wolf’s vision – but is he driving?  There are hints either way.  Personally I would be surprised if this did not lead to a more amazing power.  Either way, it lends flavor to the saga, that bubbling of other worldly stuff underneath the intrigue of the day.
  3. The wolf dreams themselves seem to tie together one of the interesting narrative devices Martin employs throughout the first two books, especially as the number of characters and capillaries of plot threads start to pile up.  I know that I can’t keep track of every storyline, but one tends to think that Martin is not expecting you to either.  But what he has done is paint the characters – subtly and with detail yes – with broad brushstrokes of characteristics.  The winter and wolves are evoked so well in the Stark clan, for instance, that you almost feel the clouds and winter whenever a chapter comes up.  Winterfell feels like a place, sure – but moreover a clear contrast with the Greyjoys who clearly evoke a seafaring people.  Indeed knowing Balon and the Starks, it makes Theon’s quest all the sillier.  The Dothraki are sharply drawn as nomadic marauders.  I guess what this is a haphazard way of saying is that the various factions seem uniquely a product of their environment and the gods they believe in and the land they are from – and it helps keep certain things straight.  I guess knowing Winterfell and what it and the Starks connote in the mind’s eye – it leads to some impressions over the virtues that might succeed over the wall.  But I don’t know.
  4. One of the themes the book has carried through so far – and continues to ruminate on if not actually deliver profound insights – is our societial proclivity to not separate the art of war and the job of governance.  So many countries have made a fetish out of military virtue as a prerequisite for leaders – let alone the number of military let coups and dictatorships and whatnot – but can a country be ruled well with the skillsets that it takes to win in battle?  Obviously notions that our military instills, and talk about things like “leadership training” imply that it IS transferable, but really?  One can counter that war requires advocacy for your side against an adversary, while governance requires advocacy for the people as a general whole, over your own interests.  It is a different worldview.  I gave Eddard short shrift in the first book – as he made wrong move after wrong move in his time as Hand of the King (very much a Spinal Tap drummer position considering what has happened to the three hands we know about prior to Tywin Lannister) – but he DID take governing seriously.  We know that he went way back with Robert and cared for him very much – though he saw Robert’s foibles clearly.  Robert was certainly an example of the sort of guy who knew and craved war and being in battle, but not governing and being in boardrooms.  Eddard offered more than that – he just let personal loyalty and a bit too dogmatic view of honour foil his ability to embrace realpolitik.  It’s too bad.
  5. Considering he has the Lady in Red (and Chris Deburgh undoubtedly in the back of the battalion providing soundtrack), it is not too big a leap to think that the setback suffered by Stannis is only temporary.  As I noted earlier, I have no idea who is driving that train – can Stannis really harness the crazy sick power that this lady is offering him – but it should be good for one battle.  What is interesting is how his court’s fool Patchface in his seemingly inane ramblings spoke of the danger of the sea.  With the fallout of this battle, did a supposed halfwit really offer prescience?  It is interesting and worth tracking.
  6. Of course, I went throughout my 1500 word rambling on the second book without actually mentioning the genuine surprise in the middle.  Let’s put it this way – Eddard’s death was a surprise in the early book, only because it felt inevitable given his moves, but as readers we are conditioned (in this sort of genre at least) to think that something good will happen, deus ex machina or otherwise.  Here, the true gameboard changing surprise DOES come out of nowhere – if you thought you could pick Renly’s fate before, you are a smarter person than I.

A Clash of Kings (SPOILERS!!!)

It is hard to sit here and try to tell you that a 969 page book qualifies as fairly taut, but somehow A Clash of Kings, George RR Martin’s sequel to A Game of Thrones – which of course became the HBO series of the same name which launched Peter Dinklage into the lead for now over Warwick Davis in the greatest living little person derby – qualifies.  The book takes the virtues of the first novel – and expands the world and the established conflicts.  However, it does more than that.  One of the normal things with any sort of series I think is trying to figure out how to keep people ready for another novel while not jerking them around.  In the movie realm for instance, The Matrix in its secret of the universe or whatever, promised a lot and contained a lot of literate movie psycho-babble.  But when it came time to deliver, the movie was not equal to the task.  It is hard not to feel screwed.  What the book does deftly is provide emotional payoff, a measure of quasi-comic relief and still move the story forward and create more mysteries.  As far as the story goes, the various threads have grown, and I have to discuss it freely – we discussed the first book here – spoilers abound …

  1. Like the previous book, Martin tells his story as snapshots from various points of view.  Just like in the first novel, we have Tyrion, Jon, Sansa, Arya, Daenerys, and Catelyn providing viewpoints.  But this time we also add Theon, Robb’s former squire who has returned to his folks on the Islands to present an offer of peace, and something more.  In these choices – to be discussed a bit further – Martin has continued the practice of showing people who are looking up at the people with real power.  Tyrion and Theon here take the place of Eddard in the last novel, he who has a version of nominal power, but almost no actual power.
  2. Theon’s arc – like Eddard – does not even get out of this volume.  In a sense I think his story provides the sort of comic relief of the various story arcs during this stormy time in the kingdom.  Theon returns to his family after having been held “hostage” essentially since he was a youth.  His delusions of grandeur, his feeling that he will be welcomed as a conquering hero – his feelings about what a stud muffin he is – are all gloriously misaligned with any form of correct thinking.  It’s almost touching how silly he is if he wasn’t so boorish.  His meeting with his long lost sister is priceless.  It is a shame the suffering he unleashed on Winterfell as he tried to conquer his old stomping grounds (where predictably, those who knew him were either appalled or trying to see if he is for real) – but his comeuppance was gotten in spades.
  3. The split Stark clan show varying signs of awareness.  Arya was one of the most loveable characters in the first book, and she continues to show – frankly – that she might actually get through this.  She is made of tougher stuff than her male mates – I am not sure if she will survive her escape from Harrenhal, but The Bull did not have the guts to initiate it.  Sansa, so clueless and unprepared for the earthquake that was going to take place in her world, at least now recognizes the personalities she is stuck with.  Joffrey is still a wholly detestable prick – but she is not at all in the dark.  In some ways her knowledge is sad – no child should have to learn about dudes and whatnot this way.  As political football takes place, her fate looks ominous – but you never know.  There is not a ton of mobility for women being “respectable”.
  4. Catelyn is worried for her children of course, but she also tries to broker a peace.  That springs one of the real genuine surprises – and it is hard to get surprised when you have read enough books in your life.  Her father is on his way out, and with her family allied with the Starks – Robb’s exploits are promising, but it is hard to say just HOW promising.
  5. It’s clear the Red Priestess that Stannis has made a Faustian deal with (well, if those sorts of religious constructs existed) is doing something.  We see her power work in a couple of jarring ways.  We know she has considerable power, which poor Davos saw – and we know Stannis was tied of not being king or whatever.  But who is really driving here, and does he have the ability to manage Melissandre.  At some level, she is going to have to cash in the relationship – what does HE offer HER?  Davos is the protagonist here, but it feels like Martin does not really see him as any more as a narrative device.  He is telling this story from the eyes of the middle … the folks without much pull … so Davos makes sense.  However, Davos is the weakest of his main characters, he just seems to exist as a witness to the Stannis side of the plot.
  6. Tyrion, so close to the titular villains in this story – is one of the more interesting arcs.  Like all of the other POV characters, he is trying to prove himself – this time to his dad.  He comes in as Hand of the King until his father is able to take over.  What is interesting about his turn as Hand is that, unlike Eddard, he is not at all unaware of realpolitik.  It just feels like he did not have all the bases covered – and there is just not enough good counsel when everyone else is positioning, and frankly his family doesn’t have his back – at all.  Varys the Eunuch seems like the most useful – and Tyrion DOES use him correctly.  He gets the city employed and he does try to make things better.  Indeed, he does his job – despite how bloody the triumph was – but clearly he ain’t gonna be getting a medal for his role.  Only Podrick Payne seems to be in his corner – we’ll see if he gets any shit for that or not.
  7. Meanwhile, in a land far far away from the main battle, we have Daenerys, fresh from her triumph and rising as queen.  However, the Dothraki have largely gotten away from her, and she is trying to take over as queen and avenge the death of her father.  She is trying to move full speed ahead with the Dothraki and her ragtag team (picking up more at the end).  However, I’m not sure she is doing much planning.  She knows the goal and knows she wants it – but it feels like the tactics have been very improvised, just driven by putting out fires.  Does she have alliances?
  8. Finally, we get to the Wall.  I am not sure if Martin had terrorism in mind as an allegory or something – probably not though it is interesting – but the events of the Night Watch above the wall feel like a version of what he hear about with the CIA and that sort of double secret Men In Black/Jason Bourne sort of stuff.  All these people are fighting their wars down there, but there is a giant force underneath that makes all of our problems not amount to a hill of beans.  I don’t know if I am articulating it correctly.  At the end, Jon’s fate is particularly fascinating.  The threat there feels like the trump card here – but aside from offering a threadbare Night’s Watch of society’s refuse (not that they should be, just sayin’), the resources do not seem sufficient for the scale of the real threat.  Do the folks at Casterly Rock or King’s Landing GET the threat?  It feels like a no.  Aside from punishing deserters, do people really CARE about life beyond the wall?

Overall the stage is set nicely for the next book.  In particular, the battle at Blackwater is a great literary scene – and the image of the water being on fire and the hell that the Lannisters must survive to hold the throne is well worth those chapters.  The world Martin produces is very rich – and the next book promises much.

Notes on A Game of Thrones (SPOILER ALERT!!!)

I noticed that in my initial review of George R.R. Martin’s tome, that I seemed to focus mostly on writing style and the peculiarities of the genre.  It was a review more than a commentary on the substance.  However, as 800 pages of a 4000 page saga or so (and one definitely worth reading by the way), some comments on what actually is happening is worthwhile.  So, be warned, there are spoilers here.

  • One of Martin’s neat tricks is to separate the sympathetic and virtuous from the savvy and the wise.  The heart and the head are not in the same place often.  Most notably this is seen in Eddard Stark, who seems to carry many of the traits of the traditional hero – in terms of honor and virtue – also doubles as being intensely frustrating and mind-bendingly stupid.  Indeed his utter lack of survival skills in this sort of setting make me wonder about plausibility.  Of course Stark’s blunders brings to light the folly of putting military folks in charge of governing, as if they are similar skillsets.  However, we make a fetish of the military culture when following our politicians.  Hmm …
  • Daenerys is clearly the favorite of the rotating protagonists in the book.  In some ways she is Ned’s counterpoint.  She starts in a position of disadvantage, being pimped out by her brother to a dude who can’t speak her language.  No hand of the king at work here, but she figures out survival skills and politics on the fly.  The ultimate fate of her brother and her decisions leading up to that point are sublime – recognizing how institutions work – even something as “savage” as the Dothraki.  The final scene of the book is kind of awesome.
  • In terms of rating the protagonists, Daenerys > Arya > Jon > Tyrion > Sansa > Catelyn > Ned.  Catelyn is ultimately kind of sad – not bound to a code of honor to an insane degree like Ned, just basically rash.  Her decision to capture Tyrion ranks as truly bad.
  • Tyrion is of course enormously likeable on TV – how can you not be impressed with a guy played by Peter Dinklage?  His verbal wit and his ability to manipulate and escape situations is fascinating.  That said, exactly where he stands is hard to tell.  He feels like more of a survivor than “of” the evil Lannisters.
  • Joffrey is a first class twerp.
  • I give Martin credit.  I have no idea where the story is going, and for a lot of exposition, I had fun reading it.  The threads can go in a lot of direction, especially as more factions get introduced.  The stuff with the Night Watch and beyond the Wall is particularly fascinating.  I have no idea how it will fit into the big picture yet, though the signs are interesting.  We know we have at least one former “you coulda been somebody” in Master Aemon.  However, is that the extent or is there much more?  It can’t be that easy to just compartmentalize rivalries of past.

Anyway, I’m about 20% of the way through with A Clash of Kings at the moment.  We’ll see how it goes.

A Game of Thrones

Well, after the HBO series and, frankly, quite a bit of peer pressure, it was time to dive into George R.R. Martin’s extensive – and rather verbose – A Song of Ice and Fire saga.  The first edition, A Game of Thrones, is the book which aligns with the first season of the HBO series.  The sweep of the novel, which contains an awful lot of exposition and introduction, is appropriately vast compared to its obvious fantasy novel predecessors.  The kingdoms covered by Martin are imagined fully and with terrific depth.  Martin has created this world from the embers of archetypes, fantasy novel lore (both real lore like Tolkien and the sort of collective unconscious of the swords and sorcerers set) and his own imagination – and the world and conflicts are as fully formed as George Lucas’ world in Star Wars.  However, Martin does a better job than post 1985 Lucas of showing us the human scale and providing the reader access points.  We are able to care about how these far off conflicts go and have a rooting stake in the outcome – and that the 805 pages here is not a slow dirge is kind of impressive.

This novel is the first in a series that is still ongoing, so there is a lot of introduction to get done.  This is something that could have been deadly, stupefyingly dull – an encyclopedia entry about a place I don’t give a crap about.  However, Martin sidesteps this pitfall by using multiple perspectives, and changing primary viewers each chapter.  In this case, we are mostly following the Stark family – who have ruled the North where the Wall is which is keeping out apparently evil, occult spirits.  Eddard “Ned” Stark is the lord of the domain (I guess sort of a governor of a state sort of thing) and his family includes his wife and give children.  One day, Robert – his old friend who has since risen to the King of the entire realm, summons him and names him to replace the deceased Jon Arryn as the King’s Hand. (his right hand man basically)  Eddard is reticent – he has known Winterfell and the North his entire life and does not want to uproot his family.  However, the king appeals to Ned’s honor and friendship and somehow he is up and leaving his family.

We get this story from Eddard’s perspective.  Stark is a good and decent man – he has a code and tries to stick to it.  However, we also get viewpoints from other areas.  Martin gives voice to the thoughts of Stark’s wife and four of Stark’s children (Bran, Jon,  Arya, Sansa), as well as an outsider of one of the ruling families as well as a princess of an order that was nearly destroyed.  Martin follows each of these stories with great care – all of the characters are outside of the power structure, but trying to survive.  We see how events outside of their control (mostly) shape their own experiences.  Martin’s smartest decision here was to stick with a small, fairly easy to follow group of characters.  There are dozens of more perspectives, but the narrative gets very cloudy with more than the half dozen or so that we end up hearing about.

Martin’s structure is sound, and his real strengths are in character development and associated plotting.  The fates of the characters all make sense – and spring from their organic personalities.  As a reader it makes it both compelling and frustrating, for instance, to see Ned Stark in action.  His values are clearly the purest of the folks introduced in this concept (and I know I am being circumspect about the plot) – but he also makes the worst decisions, and puts the dogmatic right thing ahead of situational ethics and realpolitik.  Sansa is a pathetic creature, so sweet and wanting to be the right kind of lady (of course in this realm that means catching a powerful husband – don’t shoot the messenger), but unaware of the gravity of what is going on under her nose.  Martin is spinning a lot of plates here plotwise, setting the scene for apparently complicated future doings, but we are rarely lost and the motivations are clear.

If Martin is weak in any area though, it is verbosity.  At 805 pages we get a lot of detail.  However, we also get a lot of flowery, ornate descriptions of landscapes that I suppose are supposed to provide texture, but instead seem like a parody of an author like Dickens or something.  It feels like tightening his focus could have reduced the novel by about 20% and concentrating the abundant amounts of good stuff.  That said – we have 805 pages that turned quite easily.  The sequel definitely gets my attention – and maybe some more plot discussion when that review comes up.